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Alright, I didn't think I would ever find a Lost In Blue story. Hmm, a little short, but still good.

Yes, it's short. But it's also one of my first lemons, and I improved a lot since then. Sadly, a rewrite isn't likely to happen, ever.

Well, it certainly could have been done better, but I hardly think that it deserves a 1 star rating. The sex was so short it was dissapointing. Over all, I'd give at a 3, at the minimum.

This game has been sadly forgotten and I'm sure anybody who's played it has wanted to write something like this about it. I was therefore kind of disappointed to see how short this fic was. It's a great idea, I just wish you could've thrown in more details. If you're seriously thinking of writing a lemon, write one that readers wish they could be in themselves. This was over before I could even get into it.

you've got a hot imagination, but the hymen is located at the opening of the vagina, and usually breaks upon initial insertions (just some technical advice) Or, can be broken by the girl when she masturbates. But otherwise, a rather juicy tidbit. I like caves and deserted islands. The more isolated the better