rate_review Reviews

...Just stop writing stories. Period. You're ruining Star Fox and the last thing you need to do is add any lame ass original characters. (I'm talking about your previous story and the one you speak of in your reviews.) From the way you write and speak in said review(s), it doesn't seem like your old enough to be on this website in the first place.

I will continue this story after my other one unless anyone who reviews would rather read one where Krystal has been killed the day of Fox's and her wedding. Fox gets so sad not even his mom Vixy or his youngest sister Remy can reach him. Fox's sadness almost causes an less advance race of invaders to conquer the Lylat system. Please tell me which you like more.