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for A Lesson in Obedience

by maiafay376

schedule June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story well written and everything. I LOVE Leon!!!
person Noa
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Holy hell. Wow.

Wow...
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really hot.
Thank you :D
person ix-tab
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just me....I'm just re-reading this, as I wait for more of your other fics.

God I love this. It hits all of kink buttons, so very hard. You write my favourite smut, and my very faourite non-con. Thank you for this! :)
person Leona
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going. This is one of the best stories ever. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Faaaaaaaaaantastic. An insta-fave if there ever was one. Mendez's cruel sexual sadism and Leon's helplessness and the pure sexiness of the situation make this such an awesome slice of debauchery. >=3 You did good to take advantage of the favorable situation the game gave you (I.E., the whole master bedroom option cutscene), and I loved how you kept them both in-character. Fantastic work! =D Keep it up!
person Blind
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I remembered that I had left this fiction without a review and the guilt dragged me back since it's the least I can give for such a arousing read.

First off, it was very well thought out (your whole RE fiction series is) and not slopped together like a lot of fanfictions I have passed as if they had played, read, viewed these characters for the first moment and assumed they knew their persona and dynamic structure impeccably. Your sentences are wonderful; there is thoughtful detail without needless overkill. And on that note, I really love your description (or I guess the personification) of the soul lost in the Ganado body. It was disturbingly beautiful in my opinion. I think the only thing that irked me (and only because it is a pet peeve of mine) is the convenient bottle of oil. It detours me away from the fiction and I begin to wonder if these people just happen to make plans of raping people around town. Perhaps that's just me. But other than that, I really enjoyed the fiction and couldn't help but giggle sadly at Leon's poor predicament, remembering when I dumbly followed Mendez into the room even AFTER he beat the chocolate out of me and I came back for a second round.

Anyways, great job and thanks for the wonderful read!
person Sam
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful I love your storys your really good at it I love the torture aspect to it as well. I can't wait to read more keep up the good work.
person ix-tab
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this universe, the strangeness, and the rules that gorven it. You have an amazing imagination.

This is so hot, and wrong in every way that is right. I love broken Leon, and your charactisation of him always rings true.

And the sex is mind meltingly awesome, as always.

Another piece of your work that I have enjoyed reading immensly.
person Midnight Moon
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its so sick, this is so fucking sick..... I love it. I feel so bad for Leon but I can't deny that this is really hot and just picturing it in my mind it makes me shudder. I swear I'm in love with the way you write. I was biting my nails and my heart was beating fast as if I was Leon. Lol, I hope that made sense. You're a really great writer and I wanna see more chapters soon!

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