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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh lemony fresh! Lol. It was really good. Write more? Please?
And, sweetheart, I am by no means trying to be rude, but get yourself a beta. I noticed a few instances where the wrong tense of a word was used, or it was the wrong word entirely. I'd be happy to beta for you if you'd like!
And, sweetheart, I am by no means trying to be rude, but get yourself a beta. I noticed a few instances where the wrong tense of a word was used, or it was the wrong word entirely. I'd be happy to beta for you if you'd like!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love this story!!! who watch? I need to know!!! update! UPDATE!!! ^__^
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON! it's so cool
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!! That was soooooooooooo goooooooooood please update soon
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE I WAS SO TURNED ON MUST HAVE MORE lol I hope the story is kind of short and a good happy ending between riku and sora falling in love LEMONS LEMONS LEMONS are so hott ;) wink wink lol
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!! WHEN ARE YOU GONNA WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! XD!
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.... *Nose bleed* Please hurry and make chapter 2... *Whipes away nose bleed* Or I will commit... Suicide... >.> ... I'm so lame... Anyway, keep on going with your story. You did an Exelent job!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oOo i really like this update soon!!!!!!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(sending inspiration telepathically.) If thats not enough for you then maybe a bomb in your mail will inspire you further,
as you propably are a person with an IQ of more than 45, you will understand that i liked it
as you propably are a person with an IQ of more than 45, you will understand that i liked it