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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY????
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ever heard of using a beta before you write some shit like this?
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so friggin awesome! Well written and lovely ending!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with H. Queen. Its a good concept, and Leon does scream 'Abuse me!', but you need a beta writer and some basic anatomy research.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Barf!
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For love of GOD - please consider finding a BETA for your writing. It's full of awkward sentences, typos and fragments. I've read better composition from a 3rd grader.
Golden Rule of Writing : It is WRITING. Don't write like you'd speak the story. It makes for very crappy 'talking head' story.
P.S. A research on human anatomy would be good too.
Golden Rule of Writing : It is WRITING. Don't write like you'd speak the story. It makes for very crappy 'talking head' story.
P.S. A research on human anatomy would be good too.
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must......create.....fanart.......................*eats the H.Queen*
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright Chris and Leon action. Very nice and thank you!!! Weee hot smut between the two ^____^
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gasp! Poor Leon but yay Chris came to save him.... I mean yay chris is saving him! This is the first i ever read about lickers...uh no your story is unique and the first i ever read like it and i enjoy it. Please update soon =)
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gah! well my review was deleted, grrr but anyways i would just like to say please updatecause this story is an interesting one and it go me wanting more. Wonderful job.