rate_review Reviews

I love you. You write Shadon so well that it makes my heart hurt. I look forward to ever chapter you write because they're funny and the characters are, as I'm sure I've already said and you've heard too many times now, are dead on. It would be a CRIME if this wasn't a Shadon fiction. This just can't end up Amy/Sonic.

Though I must congradulate you. You have done well to keep me on the edge of seat to see just who exactly you're going to pair with whom. One minute you think it's going to be Sonic/Amy and the next it's Shadon. I was a bit concerned about Amy the last chapter but after really thinking about it, I've decided you still have her dead on. I could just see her being that way about Sonic because that's something she's very passionate about. She may be nice but I doubt she was just sit back and let someone she thought liked Sonic stand by without some sort of warning or at least trying. As long as she doesn't get vindictive, she'll be fine.

I'm interested to see where Shadow is going. By far, this is my favorite diptiction of him and I'd love to see how he's going to cope now that he knows he likes Sonic but that Amy knows it also and is willing to fight for him. Will he ever officially confront Sonic?

One more thing: Is Sonic jealous of Amy or Shadow? I mean you made it point to know he was jealous but what was he jealous of? Thinking Shadow liked Amy or Amy liking Shadow?

Update soon, I can't wait to read!

Yet another great addition to this wonderful story. Now to review the chapter:
I was very pleased with your Amy considering after the last chapter I was a little concerned about the chapter title and exactly what you meant. I rather liked how she hit Sonic with her mallet as in this situation, I could very well see that happening. As for the little discussion between Amy and Shadow: bravo. I rather liked that Shadow kept his head (like he normally does) but still got irrated while Amy let him know what was what. Very believable.

Rouge and Knuckles forcing Tails and Cream to spy was very funny. I loved the ending. Rouge and Knuckles are so cute together. I really can't wait to read more on them, they're so interesting to read in your story.

And nice scene. Could have been longer but I suppose you didn't want a real Slash scene too soon.

Update soon please.

And I thank you so very much for that chapter but really: did you HAVE to cut it off right THERE? The sex scene? Why are you such a tease? That's not fair.

But the chapter was great. I really love how you do all the characters. But now I wonder: just who is in love with whom now? Did Sonic not look at Shadow because the dream? And what's up with him grabbing Amy's hand? It's obvious she took it the wrong. Or at least I'm hoping. Please tell they stop being silly and Shadow and Sonic end up together.

Update!

For someone who doesn't really write slash, it came out really good. I've been lurking, but I do read the chapters. This is just my first time reviewing.

I like it alot. Your slash scene was very nice, and I enjoyed it.

Update soon!

You know... When I finally got back into the Sonic fandom after eleven years of not following a single thing - comics, cartoons, games... I was hit with about a million new characters and pairings. And I decided right off the bat that I just didn't like certain pairings. Namely, Sonic/Shadow and Knuckles/Rouge. In fact, I publicly announced that I'd never like these pairings, no matter how they were written, drawn, song glorious tales of romance of, etcetera etcetera.


...And ya know, now I'm going to have to take back ALL of that, because of your fanfic. *shakes fist* You write them all very well... Scratch that, EXCELLENTLY. Fact is, I've never decided I liked a pairing after initially disliking it in all my 15+ years of fangirlism. And now... TWO pairings! Two pairings I never liked, I'm liking. O_o;

You write very nicely, and your personal style is great. It all flows so well. Great job!

And, by the way... If you still need a beta reader, I'd love to help out. My e-mail address is Gatochu@aol.com, and my AIM is Gatochu. ...I don't talk too much via IMs, though, simply because I don't know what to say. ^^; (This review's taken about twenty minutes to write so far already..) Anyways, given my relative newness to the fandom once more, I doubt I'd be good at reading through for characterization, mostly just spelling/grammar.

But from what I've read, you don't really need to worry about characterization at all! =)

I love the way you write this!!! It's so fantastic!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'll be checking daily!

Update! I wanna know what happens next!

Man, no matter what someone does, I just can't like Amy. I realize she's mostly been created in the Sonic games for comic relief somehow back in Sonic CD where she first showed up. Just the little girl who chases you around, gets captured by Mecha Sonic, Sonic saves her, but runs away before she can chase after him. The kinda freaky thing is that in the new games they seem to infer that she's older now? But she still acts like a little kid o_o;. So I can't help but look at sonic-Amy as sort of pedofilic, and like, I can't see a way he'd be interested in her <_>;. She's sorta clingy, and dependent... and sonic for the most part is fast, independent, I just don't think he'd want someone weighing him down, you know? Anyway, on to the fic. I'm really liking how your focusing on the real areas of Sonic and Shadow's relationships that really count, or the stuff that I just saw as chemistry between them. The race scenes mostly, and the rivalry and stuff, very cute! My favorite charactarization I've seen of Shadow, and I'm not even/wasnt even a big fan of him, hell I'm Sonic-Knuckles primary <_<;. Anyway! Keep up the good work, I'm happy to see fast updates, cant wait for the rest.

Ah, I've see you've updated.

I love how you write your story. Your last chapter was very interesting indeed and didn't at all go the way I thought after reading chapter three. Personally, I figured Shadow would stop Amy or Sonic would wake up, find out what happened and possibly go after her. I also like how you portray Shadow's love for Sonic. He's not overly fluffy and lovey dovey but rather reluctant and even somewhat confused. I think you nailed that aspect perfectly. You left quite a few cliffhangers and I'm rather anxious to see how it will all pan out.

I can't wait to see chapters that focus on Knuckles, I adore how your write him and other than Cream, he's the only person who's thoughts we haven't gotten to hear yet. So I do look forward to this chapter.

Otherwise, happy posting and keep up the fun chapters.

Oh, good lord, this is easily the best sonic-shadow fic I've ever read. Honestly from the one mispelling in the summary of this fic I wasnt expecting much, and there arent other problems "abound" like one of the reviewers said(though perhaps it was editted). But just, wow. These characterizations are amazing, everyone has a rational reason for their decisions and they explain them clearly. No "omg lol, I'm in love with you, rawr I hate everyone who likes you" kind of crap, or the fluffy sensitive Shadow people write. You've honestly written it really convincing/realistically too. It seems like a primarily strait pairing fic... since it really focused on Amy at start, and every other pairing in it is. So I really fear your gonna turn this, the best Sonadow representation I've read, into Amy and sonic somehow ^^;. Or this could be one of those rare fics were you just like to focus on something from an unusual point of view (<3), to analyze the character. Man, theres so much I like about this, and its just so.. sonic too. Man I cant wait to see next chapter, definitely bookmarking!