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My, what a wonderful chapter! Beautiful, even if it was more comedic. But some parts were really touching. I look forward to reading more.

~Continues to smack Amy with her own Piko mallet~

Now if only she'd go down and stay there, you know?

As for your new chapter, I rather liked it. It focused on another pairing more and well, need I go there? Very well written. Now Shadow know about Sonic and Amy, let's see a good reaction.

Well goodness Kamirine. That chapter was interesting. A lot of Knuckles and Rouge, that's for sure. Charmy is as cute as always and nice job on showing Cream's naive side. Overall, it was great chapter, even if Sonic is hanging with Amy more. Though after the little confrontation at Tail's pad, that leaves me hopeful for what's to come next chapter.

That chapter gave me shivers. The love scene was funny. I don't know if it was suppose to be but I was laughing through most of it. The only thing that made me upset this chapter was that Sonic thought about Shadow. That, and you made a note that Knuckles wanted to leave. I hope Rouge changed his mind, othewise we're going to get a heartbreaking chapter soon.

Another great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully Sonic and Shadow will fight cause I want him to stay with Amy.

My my, I was beginning to wonder when this type of action would show up in your story. We got a taste of it in the eariler part of your story. But I have to say, I'm very impressed with what you were able to write, considering you said you were bad at Slash/Sex scenes. I think you got the love scene perfectly honestly, I've never expected Knuckles to be some kind of champion in bed or even really know what to do like in most stories I've read. It was a fresh surprise, as I was worried when I saw where this was going. Loved the humor, very nice touch to the scene honestly.

Shadow and Cream were interesting and I'm looking forward to the outcome due to the conversation. I suppose that sparkle in the tree was a Chaos Emerald? Shadow does need them in order to Chaos Control, right? (That is what he did this chapter?)

And I'm glad you brought up the Master Emerald because I was beginning to think it had been forgotten. Though now I don't think his decision will be so cut and dry.

And will Chaotix stop driving Tails crazy any time soon? Poor Tails.

As usual, another great edition to the story and I'm looking forward to your next update.

I'd like to see this become a Shadon fic myself. Sure, other people right em, but this is one of the few that are actually creative and written well. As much as I read, the story is quite enjoyable. I love that Shadow and Sonic aren't complete pansies while Amy isn't nearly the annoying bitch she usually is. Cream isn't as annoying either and Tails is as cute as always, though I noticed he's not spending as much time with Sonic as he usually does in the actual game. Believe it or not though, I don't find that a problem: he need to be fleshed out of Sonic's shadow some.

Respectively though, I must say I'm in it for Knuckles. This is one of the few stories where he isn't out obessesing about his emerald. It's a part of your story yes, but it isn't the main focus he has for the most part and I like that. Though when it did get caputred, I had to laugh at his reaction to Rouge. I'm real happy (from what I read) this didn't turn into two seperate stories: one with Sonic and the others and the second with Knuckles and Rouge searching for the emerald.

Shadow's kiss was sweet, though I felt sorry for Amy. Though everyone's reaction to it was great. I loved Tails the most during this part because I could certainly see him acting that way.

That's all I read, as your story is ridiculously long. (No offense) I look forward to reading the rest of what you got.

Holy shit Batman, that was hawt. Hell yeah, Knuckles got him some! About damn time he got laid! Alrighty then, who's next? Is that how Sonic's gonna apologize to Shadow? Cause that would be just great. I mean, Shadow went to go find Sonic right? I sure as hell hope so. I'd like to see them get back on good terms cause watchin them fight is breakin my heart! Damn you, now I'm addicted. Update! Fast!

Did you take my advice or write the chapter for me? Very awesome, I completely loved it. Very realistic love seen and you're making that pairing very interesting, even if it's not the main one. Another nice chapter, I look forward to more.

Ah, nice chapter this time. The kiss between Sonic and Amy was quite cute and it looks like everyone is taking a time out after what happened. Though why didn't Sonic apologize to Shadow? He really hurt his feelings as well, making fun of Maria's death. I really think he should have, not showing interest in him, but even just as a friend, Shadow deserves some sort of apology. It was very harsh.

Knuckles and Rouge were very sweet and the doctor thinking they were married was priceless. Forshadowing perhapes? And Team Chaotix entry was great! Most people don't include them in stories and it was nice to see them at least make a cameo if they won't be here long.

The singing was great, I loved so hard just picturing it. I can't wait to read the next chapter but I'll take a break. You write quite a bit and the chapters are very detailed. @_@

wow! is there anything i cant say about this fic so far? i know i cant say anything bad about it, thats for sure! It seems your really good at wrapping humor, suspence, and action all in one. I love the way how you put real feeling to your work, and this is why i enjoy reading it ^-^ Keep up the great work, cant wait untill you realease the next chapter!! *thumbs up*