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i wasn´t going to review xD... i want Riku to rape Sora-chan *---*... muahaha.. anyway XD... i just love this chappie x).. Sora is so~ angsty and.... UPDATE SOON!

i am a little bit confused.. whose arms is he in? (i'm talking bout towards the ending) why did the name "Riku?" come up? o_o i know you said it was in Leon's PoV but you sometimes confused I with he.. or something like that.. TT_TT *confused*

i am not being selfish.. i shall not be selfish.. dont be rude by being selfish!
*starts to sob uncontrollably* why is riku a bad guy in this story. TT_TT *runs around, screaming and throwing pickles at ayeshagirl* oh well.. it is your story and so far.. i love sora's personality. i love the cute little innocent furball.. *glomps sora plushie* and leon is such a sweetie. riku is a bastard >_> theres not gonna be a sora/riku slight romance is there? *looks down hopelessly* u_u
welp.. hurry up and update faster! fast fast! =D me likes..
put leon and sora together.. fast! now! hurry! get to work! >=(

Well? I love it so far! Please continue, dear.

Please do update this. The idea has potential for a wonderfully emotive story, and if not for that, update because there just isn't enough Leon and Sora work out there.

How cute! *gushes*

Jeez... you don't need to act all desperate when you know it's good.

i think i'm gonna like this story! leon and sora make a cute couple. i also like the whole 'older brother over-protectiveiness'.

Normally, I don't EVER read Leon/Sora, in fact, of the 20 stories I read on this site today, I kept passing this one in earnest. lol But if there is one thing that I've learned, it's to never judge a book by its cover - to put it simply, this has me intrigued. Very intrigued. As in, omfg how could you leave it like that - that type of intrigued. lol I'll be looking forward to seeing what you do with this, you've managed to shift me from '100% Anti-Leon/Sora' to 'Okay, maybe Leon/Sora' in just the first chapter, good job! I'll be eagerly awaiting your new chapter!

really good, continue it. You don't see many *good* LeonXSora fics, but this one seems like it'll be good.(Leon and Sora as brothers was a really good idea, by the way) But you're so evil for leaving us with a CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!! so update NOW, unless you want me to throw YOU off a cliff. And have a nice day. n_n