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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I generally disprove of original character fics, but this is not too bad. You're certainly not a terrible writer, and you're not half bad at describing fight sequences.
Only thing I would change would be to add in the hentai part, simply because this is, after all, an adult fan fic website. ^^;
Only thing I would change would be to add in the hentai part, simply because this is, after all, an adult fan fic website. ^^;
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool! I like it! =D