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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I've read! You should really make a sequel! That'd be awesome!
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Who would've thought that bondage could be so hot! If your going to continue this,(which I hope you will)then you should have it where Kasumi gets to have her way with Ayane.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i must say, i'm quite impressed. and it takes a lot to impress me. keep going.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well what the hell are you waiting for!?
continue for Godsake!
continue for Godsake!
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...i mean holy shit wow. i only started play DoA a few days ago and reading fan fiction about it yesterday but this was...wow. write a sequel please i want to see more um sisterly bonding (pun not intended)
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
truth and insanity indeed! o.O my... this is very kinky.......
lol. -winks-
lol. -winks-
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
creepy... but strangely arousing.
God you have to continue.
God you have to continue.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ayane is certainly the... interesting one isn't she? Although this is an odd.. (rape?) I still find it pretty arousing for two sisters having a go on it.
I hope to see the next chapter soon, this is certainly a promising story.
I hope to see the next chapter soon, this is certainly a promising story.
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn. Going to have to... take a cold shower....
shit dude you have to continue.
shit dude you have to continue.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A fucking turn on. PLEASE PLEASE continue............
;P If you don't I'll send my penguins to rape you.
;P If you don't I'll send my penguins to rape you.