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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really have hooked me. I really fell for the scene of 'sacrifice'. The violence was so... silent and creepy, wordless wave of pain and humiliation. You really know your way with words. I thank you for sharing this story.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought the summary said M/f, not M/m?
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated!
HA! I knew it was Albel! It makes me oh so happy it wasn't...Roger *twitch*
I'm really curious to see what happened in the past. I hope you update soon!
~Lee
HA! I knew it was Albel! It makes me oh so happy it wasn't...Roger *twitch*
I'm really curious to see what happened in the past. I hope you update soon!
~Lee
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't sure I'd like this story when I first started reading it but the second and third chapters made me change my mind. It seems interesting, sweet but angsty at the same time and the end of the third chapter really made me smile. I can't believe Albel, still calling him a "Maggot" if he weren't so hot he'd be unforgivable! Anyway, I'm pleased to see how this story is going; it looks like it's going to be an exciting romance/adventure.
Thanks for writing!
Thanks for writing!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!! Your imagery and grasp of writing is very very good, hehehe,
Update soon!!!!! I will check every day to see if you've updated... :)
Update soon!!!!! I will check every day to see if you've updated... :)
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I read your warning and completely forgot. That WAS violent!
But violence, blood, gore, and all the good stuff are appropriate at times ^.^
Okay, I'm pretty sure I know who Fayt's lover is, just from the comment about his eyes. This story is very well written, but despite that, if I'm wrong and this turns out to be a...oh, I dunno, Faty x Roger (wtf? I know) fic, I just may keel over and die. Heh, but besides Roger, I could care less. Uh, no. Roger and Adray. Then I could care less. Cliff would be cool. Luther would be sehxy (but I don't believe it's him). And Albel would be perfect.
Hehehe.
Yeah.
Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
~Lee
But violence, blood, gore, and all the good stuff are appropriate at times ^.^
Okay, I'm pretty sure I know who Fayt's lover is, just from the comment about his eyes. This story is very well written, but despite that, if I'm wrong and this turns out to be a...oh, I dunno, Faty x Roger (wtf? I know) fic, I just may keel over and die. Heh, but besides Roger, I could care less. Uh, no. Roger and Adray. Then I could care less. Cliff would be cool. Luther would be sehxy (but I don't believe it's him). And Albel would be perfect.
Hehehe.
Yeah.
Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
~Lee
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep the story going, is great. i liked the beginning very much, please do another chapter.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I loved your story!!! I hope
you will update soon I really want
to know the rest of the story! :3
So please don't stop I'll cheer for
you!! GOOO!!!! And I think it's
Albel :P . Well maybe also because
I hope it's Albel. =^.^=
Love the pair AlbelxFayt
-Erim-
you will update soon I really want
to know the rest of the story! :3
So please don't stop I'll cheer for
you!! GOOO!!!! And I think it's
Albel :P . Well maybe also because
I hope it's Albel. =^.^=
Love the pair AlbelxFayt
-Erim-