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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. I love Kalas and Lyude and this was a good concept. The flow seemed a bit...iffy... Maybe that was just me though. Either way, I enjoyed this very much and wished there was another chapter. Although this ended quite well.
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. this is just ... great!! Sequel? PLEEAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very hot; I liked it! You might look into a beta reader because it could really use some editing, but it was sexy and enjoyable nonetheless.