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Oh how cute a baby hedgehog with purple quills. I can just see how little eclipse looks and he sound so cute. A wonderful moving chapter make me think of when my mom had my sister you nail the pain right on the head. Please update soon. SOOO CUTE Shadow/Amy rule.

hmmmmm...

Nice opening, very addicting way to start, even thought it kinda feels rushed.
You let six months go by and Sonic's still wallowing in guilt? I was almost thinking you were going to demonize the character in a similar fashion to the frist story
Eclipse? Someone using Chaos Controll? I choose not to toss out my two cents worth of guesses this early, I'm gonna wait untill your update before I start digging too deeply.
Anyhoo, again, great start.

Respectfully yours,
AntwerpsRule

P.S. Just me...please don't kill the child...

Up to the usual standard I see. You write a good, plausible, gripping story that tries (And if I might say so, succeeds) to be an actual story instead of just a jumble of words hurled together into something vaugely approaching english. Now, if only the rest of fanfiction was this quality, it might not have such a bad name.

A few niggles I might have though, is considering Shadow's physical power, even taking into account any lasting effects from his wound, surely fainting is a bit ofd an exaggeration? Air loss will of course knock somebody out, but I think taking five minutes to wake up again is a bit much, I would have thought one minute, two at the most.

Wow I can't wait for the next chapter!! I also can't wait to see what Eclipse grows up to be like!!! Please update soon!!