rate_review Reviews

Faking a look of hurt, Albel touched his chest where his heart would have been.. that was my favorite line. and oh man... he really was telling the truth.

Since you did put "The End" I'm guessing you're not writing any more. But God damn! I need some CliffxAlbel smut (and that doesn't include what I do in RPs...or what my corrupted little mind is coming up with at the moment *wicked grin*)! Meh...it's sooo bloody hard to find. Oh well, good job on this!

Oh....my....GOD! LMFAO! That was soo mean!!!! Honest to god though, I've never even played this game before or even heard of it. I just read it cause you wrote it and I'm damn glad that I did. Albel is one sly mothafucker, haha, poor Cliff. I can't even begin to imagine how embarrassed he is

Oh man i loved this story, albels bold actions, and cliffs really bold actions clashing together, i mean wow that was intertaining, i wish there was more, id print it out in a heart beat..>< loved it!

Awesome! I loved this ficlet! I hope you write more ^ ^

That was freaking awesome!!! I loved it so much... Ah poor Cliff. >.> You know what would be awesome though... if you wrote a next chapter, v.v cause it was so good and it would suck to just leave it at that!

Ah! (*note to self: I must read your other fics - I love the way you write.) I couldn't stop imagining Cliff jerking off and Albel standing so close to him *drool* It was like my brain short-circuited for a couple of minutes when I read that *shiver*. Albel is so cruel (I LOVE IT!) and his teasing was fucking relentless - I mean the "I -don't- wear anything under it" comment had me both laughing and whimpering at the BOLDNESS there. Shit, I would have never thought Albel could be that BOLD to be talking about his choice in underwear (or lack thereof) in front of a 'I-was-just-jacking-off' Cliff. My God. Hot. (Let me not even get STARTED on his "tell me what you want" - let's just say, I almost crooned at Cliff's response then wanted to attack Albel MYSELF when he totally dashed any hopes of any sex ever happening - so cruel.) Funniest thing of all: the thing Albel said about Roger was TRUE. I mean honestly, the idea of Cliff chasing after Albel while shouting THAT then stumbling upon a thoroughly shocked Fayt and [pinned] Roger is way too funny for its own good - I could almost taste the humilation and embarassment in the air lmao. Albel is so cruel, but so damn good.

In shorter, more sensical words: Loved it. And I truly would not mind if you went serious with this; personally, I'd love to see what Cliff would do to get back at Albel. *nods enthusiastically* (Because leaving the story at that would be as much of a tease as Albel was *pout* )