rate_review Reviews

Well, pretty good lookin' so far. I'm not usually fond of major OCs, if only because most people don't fit them into their chosen fandom well, but I don't mind this Daemon guy. He's a little TOO "invincible" for my tastes, but I assume it'll all come crashing down at his expense eventually. Well, that's what the "happy ending" would dictate, anyway. We'll just have to see how you choose to progress with and end things.


- Jen

So far, this fic is incredible! I love your portrayal of Dante, easily one of the best I've seen yet - he comes off as much too soft in many of the fanfics I read, and this fic does justice to his half-demonic nature, like the rest of your fiction. Trish, too, is on track to becoming greatly likeable.

And at last! A challenging OC, worthy of someone like Dante. I'm intrigued about him already; I can't wait to see where you take this and how you'll reveal it to us. Also looking forward to the hot sex, of course ;3. Give us more Daemon!

Indeed, reviews are slow to come. Pisses you off sometimes, doesn't it? You write so much, and people barely find a few minutes to leave a small message. Keep going. Kidavi's on the move again. Character death.. hmm..