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for His Treasure, Her Pain

by DragonChyld

person kimisan
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this during my free time. Only played the game once but I think you did a great job with Albel. Keep up the great work!
person EllenaDea
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very nice. I like the first part where Albel being gentle^^.
person turkaerith
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um ... great lemon! This is keeki by the way.

Albel was surprisingly gentle, it was nice. I hope you decide to write more.
person rice
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and dragon.. albelxsophia forever. i just love their lemons..
person rice
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, dragon this is so good. i'm blushed though. heheh.. so good.. i love it...

you have to continue, i want to see what he felt about her in the morning. and maybe get some morning snacks too.. bahha.. i'm so naughty...
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... I liked it and it was nicely written. ...I wish I had more to say about it. Please forgive me, it was kinda hard reading this because even though I can see that the pairing is possible I'm still a little uncomfortable reading about them. I know I'll get used to it eventually, but it's still a little too new to me. Either way, this was a good story and it deserves a good review.

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