schedule
June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, not bad. The characters come across nicely. Very few spelling or grammar errors to be seen, and the focus is on the characters' emotions rather than the lovemaking itself. Tastefully done. Nice work. ~J.
schedule
May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!