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I see what you mean...as the fact might be that Albel can get a little sad thinking Fayt only see him as a child to take care of. I wonder if he might try and prove to Fayt that his mind is not like a Child like kiss him that would be kind of cute but I don't know what would Fayt think about it...but as eveone sad before good luck with this one.

its soo cute and funny. you should keep writing it ^.^

Another awesome chapter!!! I loved the way Abel acted...you have him sooo in character, if that makes any sense o.O I like the way Fayt reacted as well. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

This entire chapter, I could not stop grining. I love the way Fayt's and Albel's personalities match up with one another. They are adorable. And Albel is sweet, even if he's being a brat. I was surprised that Cliff flew off the handle-Wow! That was something I was not expecting, nice surprise. Although now I fear for Albel's safety, and a little for Cliff's integrity. :(

Oh well, its still a wonderful story, I love it. Little Albel reminds me of a doujinshi about a Fayt and Albel Humcoulus (spelling?) that attack each other and end up being friends. It's cute. I look forward to your next update!

Yes, a little Albel. And he so adorably latched onto Fayt. I like it, its not something you'd expect for these two. Great idea, I can't wait till your next chapter.

Hmmm... this... is different. I've read cat!Albel (I've also seen a couple of cat!Albel pics too. I have to say, he's a cute kitty *hears hiss in background. Sweat drops*) *ahem* Yeah, so. This is new, I've seen chibi Albel pictures, (They are borderline painful, thats how cute they are. So cute they hurt.) But making it into a story, how amusing. Weird how his katana shrunk too, talk about yikes. Now you've got mini-Albel and his tiny Sword of Doom, all I can say is Poor. Poor. Cliff. lol I noticed a few writing errors as well as some words that just didn't fit or some that were just left out, but that's because I'm an English freak lol Makes me wonder about the psyche of Albel though, Albel as a child is entirely different from Child!Albel - difference being, one refers to his childhood, whereas the other refers to his adult form shrinking; which in all honestly means that this Albel is still going to be a damn devil. I mean imagine all the crap he can get into now that he still has the same intelligence of his adult self, but now in a child's body. As Cliff would probably say, Scareee. All in all, this is going to be a very interesting read and I can't wait to see the next chapter. Fayt, a mommy lmfao right there.

You made Albel into a chibi...that's SO cute...Yeah I can picture him in Fayt's arms lol. so what are the Girls going to think about this?, since they already think how close Albel and Fayt are...but at lest it looks like Nel is the only one that sane *Yet*. but it's ture Fayt would make a great mother if he did have a child...but enough about that I'll let you get back on you're fic...please do tbc...

So kawai! Just try to imagine Albel being a three years old child... in Fayt's arms... CUTE!!!!!!!! I really want a pic of this!!!!!...Hum...sorry.... Continue your beautiful story!!!!!! ^_^ And don't give up! *chibi eyes* PLEASE!

Shinia

Awwww a three year old Albel! Thats so cute I love the story idea! My favorite part was when abel yelled "Maggots!" that was so funny! Keep it up you have a very unqiue writing style!

I hope you keep going with this story. You writing style is great and I am soo in love with the your story line. Good luck!!