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May 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff, please continue! I want to see more Prince/Lym!
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May 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Told you I'd get around to reviewing this! But where's the second chapter? I thought you said you added another, and I don't see it... Anyway, like I said before, you've got real writing talent! Keep up the good work!
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April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, thanks for your kind words. I've always wondered why some authors will hold a chapter "hostage" for reviews. Now I know. It's a great feeling when someone likes your work. You've motivated me to write another installment.
As for your Miakis/Lym concerns, it wasn't going to go *too* far. :p I won't say how far now, because I'll ruin it for later. And the Prince and Lym will definetly be seeing more of each other. I may have to step away from game canon in terms of timeline to give myself more room for encounters between the characters I'll be working with. I wanted to work Lyon in there somewhere, matter of fact, now that I think of it, I know exacly *where* I want to work her in...
Hey, maybe the Godwins can fall by the wayside for a while. Gizel's not so impatient that he won't delay his plans for a while, given the right impetus. :p
I'm also considering a yuri lemon, maybe Luserina/Viki/Lyon. Thoughts? E-mail me then!
~LZ
As for your Miakis/Lym concerns, it wasn't going to go *too* far. :p I won't say how far now, because I'll ruin it for later. And the Prince and Lym will definetly be seeing more of each other. I may have to step away from game canon in terms of timeline to give myself more room for encounters between the characters I'll be working with. I wanted to work Lyon in there somewhere, matter of fact, now that I think of it, I know exacly *where* I want to work her in...
Hey, maybe the Godwins can fall by the wayside for a while. Gizel's not so impatient that he won't delay his plans for a while, given the right impetus. :p
I'm also considering a yuri lemon, maybe Luserina/Viki/Lyon. Thoughts? E-mail me then!
~LZ
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April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was great. A little intense (as I'm not used to incest), but still great.
I could definitely see some incesterous undertones in the game concerning these two, so I was hoping/planning to see something like this emerge from it. Miakis and Lym is a little harder to believe, but I can still somewhat see it, seeing as how Miakis teases the Princess all the time (nothing beyond "teasing" her clit, though). I also pictured Lymsleia being 12 as opposed to 10, but it's pretty hard to tell what would be more accurate with her.
But again, great first fanfic! I really hope you'll write a sequel or spinoff - I want to see them get even farther (actual intercourse, perhaps? She may be young, but she still is a future (and very soon-to-be) Queen). Either way, I'll be sure to read what ever you come up with next!
I could definitely see some incesterous undertones in the game concerning these two, so I was hoping/planning to see something like this emerge from it. Miakis and Lym is a little harder to believe, but I can still somewhat see it, seeing as how Miakis teases the Princess all the time (nothing beyond "teasing" her clit, though). I also pictured Lymsleia being 12 as opposed to 10, but it's pretty hard to tell what would be more accurate with her.
But again, great first fanfic! I really hope you'll write a sequel or spinoff - I want to see them get even farther (actual intercourse, perhaps? She may be young, but she still is a future (and very soon-to-be) Queen). Either way, I'll be sure to read what ever you come up with next!