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i really wish you would update this its really good

NOOOOOOOO,I wanna read more!!
where's the next chap? I am M/M sex deprived right now and I need my dose before I go nuts totally.
I know I sound nuts but is what happens when you stop writting a good story for a yaoi fangirl, it's pretty dangerious. So please write and I'll rewrd you with a plot to a oneshotcuz I Crimsy is the best plot trader in town mwahahahaha!!!

i love Cloud/Sora fics!!!!!! *hugs Sora and Cloud* yay! i love you! i love this story!! XD i am so happy. please update!

Wow, I LOVE it! When I first read there would be Riku bashing I was iffy, but with the storyline you put it fits! Riku tends to be one of my favorite characters too.

This is actually the first SoraxCloud fic I've read, but I love the idea. Your adult Sora sounds...nice, if you know what I mean. ^^ <3

omg i love this story. need more.

I never read a Cloud/Sora b-4 but this is really good!
(even though I did say it was 1 of my OTPs...oh well now its true :)
*Resists urge to hit Yuffie* Why did she interupt them :( *twitches*

I want to know what happens next...

There was no issue with spelling except at the very beginning of Chp 3,
but it was fine after the flashback.
I have trouble picturing Sora older...with braids...but that's just me.

You should continue!

Good plot line. Good writing style.