rate_review Reviews

Great story, sucks there's no more...-_-

great job! better than anything i could write.

Lusty, true to form and extremly raunchy....A good read in all.

That story was actually really good. It wasn't goofy or stupid at all! I didn't know what to expect really, but it definitely exceeded my expectations! Kickass

Much better then previous. lots more detail and more vivid. Very nicely done

EmeraldsAndAmethyst, about your performance...
It is magnificent!

Wow... I was rather impressed by the writing in "Just Beneath the Surface" and I'm still impressed by this. It takes a lot of talent to write smut that remains sensuous and romantic, and I think you pull it off quite nicely. Bravo!

Also, kudos for acknowledging the pairing of Knuckles/Julie-Su (And especially the deliciously improbable crack pairing of Vector/Julie-Su). It's good to see one of my favorite characters from the comics finally finding some love...

You start to repeat yourself with the nipple-pleasing early on. However, altogether it's an erotic story. Good going (with my fine editing skills, mwahaha!) ;)

This is pure, pointless smut.

But it's well-written pure, pointless smut. And sometimes that's just what you want.

So I expect I'll be back to read it again...

If anything, I have to say this is detailed very well. You also made note on how damn nervous he is when it comes to women.

I have always been a fan of Knux and Julie being together...not so much Knux/Rouge. Though I like seeing how others deal with that pairing or how Knuckles and Rouge just don't work out, heh heh ^^

Hope you have more work to share, see ya around.