rate_review Reviews

Sweet, cant wait for the next chapter

Not bad at all! I gave it a 4, not sure why though. A decent tale with proper design and a not-too-fast storyline... But it just didn't seem to have a certain...something! I don't know, maybe I'm wrong, but I do know it was well writen and had a pretty good, um, *cough* "love scene" in it as it was not drawn out, but not a "quikie" either. All in all, a good story, hope to see more like it. (I guess I gave it a four because I'm always too nice in my reviews, but honest, and was hoping to rate one lower. Maybe you do deserve a 5... But personal satisfaction of the author is worth a million critic remarks!)

Wonderful story Miss! The plot was solid, (but innacurate and I won't rant about that) the passion was splendid, and you got all the characters just about right! I can't to read the rest, and perhaps a sequel from you. Keep writing! I give it a 5.

This story is great! I can't wait for you to update.

This looks really interesting. Please continue.