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January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you should probably update Chapter 0 with the other pairings you've done.
Just thought I'd let you know.
And yes, your story is fantastic. I patiently await more.
Just thought I'd let you know.
And yes, your story is fantastic. I patiently await more.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story. I enjoy the way it has meandered from its beginning and look forward, one yaoi writer to another. Luck and blessings.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I never thought I would find Bryan/Steve to make me blush, but that did. My only critique is to *please* thesaurus a synonym for "lust." Use "lewd," "licentious," "bawdry," or even "horny." Seeing "lust" so much got a bit on the repetitive side for me, other wise, good characterizations... and a creepy thought of Bryan finishing sex with *that* laugh. XD
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Since AFF.net doesn't have any way to reply to reviews, I'm popping this one in here.
Dr. Neverland - Thank you so much for pointing the 'lust' word out to me. I've fixed it up a bit so that it isn't as repetitive ^_^"
The thesaurus is my best friend when I write (aside from the usual dictionary) but every now and then, I can't see the forest for the trees and can't see words that are being over-used >_<"
Dr. Neverland - Thank you so much for pointing the 'lust' word out to me. I've fixed it up a bit so that it isn't as repetitive ^_^"
The thesaurus is my best friend when I write (aside from the usual dictionary) but every now and then, I can't see the forest for the trees and can't see words that are being over-used >_<"
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is great keep it up, I want more.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK! One word comes to my mouth...LEE! I bet he's behind this.
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much. Words can't even describe how awesome you are at writing.
Hwoarang/Jin = Love, Bryan/Steve = Love
I'm excited to see your next chapter!
Hwoarang/Jin = Love, Bryan/Steve = Love
I'm excited to see your next chapter!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How did I miss this?
This story is drool worthy. Now I'm wondering who set up the whole thing. Kazuya doesn't seem perverted enough and I somehow doubt it's Heihachi-seems like too much of a homophobe. Lee is a possiblity since he seems gay enough, but I still have no clue.
I don't know, but I *do* know that I want to see more. Your characterization is spot-on. Hwoarang is his snarky, aggressive self and Jin is taciturn and mysterious. I think this story has turned me into a major Hwoarang/Jin shipper now. LOL
This story is drool worthy. Now I'm wondering who set up the whole thing. Kazuya doesn't seem perverted enough and I somehow doubt it's Heihachi-seems like too much of a homophobe. Lee is a possiblity since he seems gay enough, but I still have no clue.
I don't know, but I *do* know that I want to see more. Your characterization is spot-on. Hwoarang is his snarky, aggressive self and Jin is taciturn and mysterious. I think this story has turned me into a major Hwoarang/Jin shipper now. LOL
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Generally don't post much in the way of reviews, but just have to say that you write really well! I hope you'll continue writing it in whatever way you've planned. I'd love to see the pairing reversed if you are so inclined, but I know personally I'd struggle so hard to write down a H/J as opposed to a J/H, so rest assured I have no expectations.
Good job!
Good job!
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, that was really good! ^o^ Very smexy~ and you captured the characters really well and managed to avoid any OOCness or sappyness. :3 I can't help thinking that it was Lee who was behind it all! XD