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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, not meaning to be rude, but I have something to say.
I like your style, and I think you are a very fair writer, but your grammar is atrocious. I am offering my services as a beta reader/fixer if you'd like them. Get back to me, I rather like this fic and I'd be more than pleased to fix the grammar errors.
I signed in so you can email me when you see fit.
I'm sorry, by the way, if I sound presumptuous or arrogant, but I would really like to see this in a more... Litterate fashion.
I like your style, and I think you are a very fair writer, but your grammar is atrocious. I am offering my services as a beta reader/fixer if you'd like them. Get back to me, I rather like this fic and I'd be more than pleased to fix the grammar errors.
I signed in so you can email me when you see fit.
I'm sorry, by the way, if I sound presumptuous or arrogant, but I would really like to see this in a more... Litterate fashion.
schedule
March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really nicely done! It was so sweet - and yet so hot!! Good job!
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was cool. :) good job. keep it up!
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I love Legacy of kain yaoi! I love this story! lol
"Its me... Rahab" Said Zephon. lol
hehehe
"Its me... Rahab" Said Zephon. lol
hehehe