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February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back, Bojack. Your story is still doing just fine, but... it's a bit spacy. (That's probably not even a word) It looks like you triple spaced everything. Plus, you had a few spelling errors, or you didn't use a certain word properly. Fix this, and I think everything will be ok. 3.5 out of 5 is what I give you this time around. Finish up! Or I'll kill you! Have a nice day!
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All right! good job! you've got me hooked. I give you a 3 out of 5, keep up the good work! I do want to see what happens next, so do update ASAP!