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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hola! ya regrese! [hello! i have returned!]
ustedes hacen muy muy bien. [you guys do relly really good]
todavia tienen mi attencion. [you guys still have my attention.]
por favor, yo no qiero ver Tails como un joto. [please, i dont want to see Tails as a homo.]
yo se que ustedes dijieron que no van a cambiarlo, pero por favor pueden? [i know you guys said you wouldnt change it, but could you please?]
Tails es uno de mi favoritos, y no qiero verlo asi. [Tails is one of my favorite characters, and i dont want to see him this way.]
ya con que ahgan esto, estoy conforme. por que esta estoria es excellente sin cosas asi. [just as long as you guys do this, im good. because this story is excellent without things like this.]
Adrian Inaba tiene rason, Espio y Mirage van a tener un hijo vien feo! [Adrian Inaba has reason, Espio and Mirage are going to have one ugly child.]
adios! [bye!]
ustedes hacen muy muy bien. [you guys do relly really good]
todavia tienen mi attencion. [you guys still have my attention.]
por favor, yo no qiero ver Tails como un joto. [please, i dont want to see Tails as a homo.]
yo se que ustedes dijieron que no van a cambiarlo, pero por favor pueden? [i know you guys said you wouldnt change it, but could you please?]
Tails es uno de mi favoritos, y no qiero verlo asi. [Tails is one of my favorite characters, and i dont want to see him this way.]
ya con que ahgan esto, estoy conforme. por que esta estoria es excellente sin cosas asi. [just as long as you guys do this, im good. because this story is excellent without things like this.]
Adrian Inaba tiene rason, Espio y Mirage van a tener un hijo vien feo! [Adrian Inaba has reason, Espio and Mirage are going to have one ugly child.]
adios! [bye!]
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
These last two chapters have been especially great. Particularly because you added some depth to Tails and Espio, (even Knuckles).
Seriously, this has to be the one story I've read where they actually added some background information/depth as to why a character like Tails or Knuckles might be homosexual. Usually, you get the basic one-shot lemon in which Tails walks in on one of the others masterbating and wants to join in out of curiosity.
This sounds like something you actually might see a person in real life doing if they're dealing with this issue, which is confiding in someone they trust about the matter. In this case, it's Knuckles, but it works out - a normally introverted type like himself would prefer to listen rather than be the center of attention.
With all that in mind, I find that interesting, as well as a fresh change of pace from the typical Tails x Cream pairing, which probably wouldn't go any further than puppy love given their current ages in the games.
The development between Mirage and Espio has me rooting that they'll soon throw caution to the wind and give in to their passions. Love isn't always a logical thing...
Finally, that snippet about that 'Midnight' character Mirage was dreaming about has me all the more curious. Failed Ultimate perhaps?
Seriously, this has to be the one story I've read where they actually added some background information/depth as to why a character like Tails or Knuckles might be homosexual. Usually, you get the basic one-shot lemon in which Tails walks in on one of the others masterbating and wants to join in out of curiosity.
This sounds like something you actually might see a person in real life doing if they're dealing with this issue, which is confiding in someone they trust about the matter. In this case, it's Knuckles, but it works out - a normally introverted type like himself would prefer to listen rather than be the center of attention.
With all that in mind, I find that interesting, as well as a fresh change of pace from the typical Tails x Cream pairing, which probably wouldn't go any further than puppy love given their current ages in the games.
The development between Mirage and Espio has me rooting that they'll soon throw caution to the wind and give in to their passions. Love isn't always a logical thing...
Finally, that snippet about that 'Midnight' character Mirage was dreaming about has me all the more curious. Failed Ultimate perhaps?
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Who didn't see this coming. :P
For some reason, when I try to picture what Mirage would look like,
I kind of get a mix of Blaze ands Shadow. I guess it's just me. ^_^
Still, the "Midnight" bugs me. Not sure if this has something to do with what happened on ARK or not.
Also, new picture of Shadow in STH came out this week. And Shadow seems to have a dark clone. (if he wasn't dark enough)
This clone may not be green, but he kind of gives off a vibe like Ashura does in this story. It may just be me though but I thought of Ashura when I saw this. Take a look at the picture's yourself and see what you think?
http://xbox360media.ign.com/xbox360/image/article/723/723440/sonic-the-hedgehog-20060804103600981.jpg
http://xbox360media.ign.com/xbox360/image/article/723/723440/sonic-the-hedgehog-20060804103607200.jpg
Can't wait till next weeks chapter. And sorry just had to re-write some of your fic. But it was for the best and thats what matters. ;)
For some reason, when I try to picture what Mirage would look like,
I kind of get a mix of Blaze ands Shadow. I guess it's just me. ^_^
Still, the "Midnight" bugs me. Not sure if this has something to do with what happened on ARK or not.
Also, new picture of Shadow in STH came out this week. And Shadow seems to have a dark clone. (if he wasn't dark enough)
This clone may not be green, but he kind of gives off a vibe like Ashura does in this story. It may just be me though but I thought of Ashura when I saw this. Take a look at the picture's yourself and see what you think?
http://xbox360media.ign.com/xbox360/image/article/723/723440/sonic-the-hedgehog-20060804103600981.jpg
http://xbox360media.ign.com/xbox360/image/article/723/723440/sonic-the-hedgehog-20060804103607200.jpg
Can't wait till next weeks chapter. And sorry just had to re-write some of your fic. But it was for the best and thats what matters. ;)
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, It's been an awfully long time since I've reviewed this, hasn't it? I've been busy with several things in my life, but I've always been sure to read this when it updates every Saturday, so I'll leave you two with my two cents:
I'm really enjoying the sexual tension between Espio and Mirage. It's clear that they both have an infatuation for each other, the only question is how long it will be before they have sex. I'd guess it'll be the next chapter, or the one after that if you decide to be evil and cause people to wait another week.
As for Tails being gay, I don't exactly like the idea. I'm not homophobic, it's just extremely overdone. If you read a lot of fics on the site you'll notice how many authors like to make Tails gay, so when I see it being done it just comes off as cliché, much like Wile E. Coyote getting an anvil dropped on his head in a Road Runner cartoon.
That's about all I have to say for this week, looking forward to the next chapter.
I'm really enjoying the sexual tension between Espio and Mirage. It's clear that they both have an infatuation for each other, the only question is how long it will be before they have sex. I'd guess it'll be the next chapter, or the one after that if you decide to be evil and cause people to wait another week.
As for Tails being gay, I don't exactly like the idea. I'm not homophobic, it's just extremely overdone. If you read a lot of fics on the site you'll notice how many authors like to make Tails gay, so when I see it being done it just comes off as cliché, much like Wile E. Coyote getting an anvil dropped on his head in a Road Runner cartoon.
That's about all I have to say for this week, looking forward to the next chapter.
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*come's marching in with a rainbow flag then clear's throt.* um hi this is my first time revewing for your fanfic and I have to say when I started reading this I just could not stop till I hit the wall that is the cerint end of your story at the time. it is brilyet but yet you two are a cupll of twisted sister's. *shudder's at the memory of soadow in the lab.* I have one request though, that you contenu with the path that Tails' is now on. I would be veary disapoted if he tured stright now because of certen revew's. *glear's at OiJimmy and Disaster Master.* if it lead's him to a phsacle incounter with Knuckles then so beit I would love to read that. as for the situwasion between Espio and Mirage... there gone have one damn ugly kid that baby ant goen be prity. or atlest the way I immagen it turning out as is.. I don't know how you two would picer it as... well that is my pice I am done so see you the next time I mack a rear review. *turn's to leave but stop's and give's OiJimmy and Disaster Master the finger first before marching out.*
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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ashura can torture with the mind but can he kill? Or rape with only using his thoughts? When Mairge didn't want to talk about what Ashura did to her it seemed that way. I have to admit, in some chapters I rushed over it and need to go back and read it again to get a better understanding of the characters.
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this series so far. I would really like it if you kept on writing. i really cant find ny thing to complain or fix so far.
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yikes, that's kinda creepy. Ashura can torture you just by thinking it up? Chapter 7 score= 3 out of 5. A little short but you probably don't want to hear me whine like a little girl, so good job. There's lots of things that still need atention to them, like, when is GUN going to get involved with Ashura? What about Sonic? What about Eggman? There's not much to say about this chapter so....that's it! Have a nice day!
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I guess you guys are planing something with Mirage and Espio now. I'm not sure how this is going to turn out but i'll have to see what you writers came up with. Also, it's been a bit since we heard from Shadow and Amy? Anything planed with them?
Nice chapter though. ;)
Nice chapter though. ;)
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh I see Tails is a homo lol