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Hey you have to give us time, just kidding. a good chapter I like The Prince & Oulan together and just like the characters I'm a little sad that they can't stay together. I really like had they were planing conquests together. Love that Oulan is a female kyle.

Chapter 19 had a good feeling just all the actively that was going on , And who all was in it. It was funny to see Nina finally get something she’s been needing for a long time and the way the prince fool Oulan in thinking he was mad. Oh I almost for got about Rina and Ellie 2 of my favorite characters love the way they were used I really loved how the prince kiss them and act as if it was custom in his nation oh and the Flick part was just too funny. It was good to see Nanami and see her as a good fighter and not just comical relief . I hope you keep the Prince in the city states for just a while longer. And I hope he gets a shot at Sierra although it might be a little out of character for her to fool around with someone she just met. You do good work.

Mr. Dragon lol. Oulan and The Prince together seems just too right their personalities mesh well together it also funny to see somebody that is as big a horndog as Kyle and The Prince. I really Hope the Prince gets a go with rina I would really like to see him with both sisters but that just wouldn't fit Eilie she seems to devoted Riou. very good work

hey I just started reading this fic and boy those 1st couple of chaps were hot I can hardly wait to read more.

I love those sisters so much. But onto the review I like Prince and Oulan together now he has a whole new Kyle to chase women with that he can also screw it's a great fit. I would like to see somthing with Nanami however it wouldn't feel right for her just to drop her pants for anybody but Riou or Jowy

No one review again! We have 108...all the Stars are taken!...oh wait, this makes 109, aw crap!

Oh well, this chapter is my new favorite, thank you for putting my favorite female (next to Chris) in this one.

Man you can really kick out those updates fast. Hey since you have them in the City states how about adding something with Sierra I'm a big fan of that Vamp.

Man you've been busy this weekend, Thanks again for being so dedicated I can't wait to see what happens. I'm Sorry for such a small message.

Please don't wait till this weekend I gots to see what happens to My Viki. But seriously I love this story and all the characters. I love all the twist & turns You have a knack for adding stuff that is unexpected.

Hope that you get the update out tonight. I want to see more Oulan so badly and more of the city states