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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the Lyon,Prince and Arshtat stuff
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A well rounded story, it has everthing
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey don't worry about not getting a update out last night. A writer needs to have a life after all.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice action in chapter 10. I hope you plan to do more action scenes.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Like the new chapter. And I like that the bathscene has been drawn out for so long. Also like That there's is some people that Jeane can't just over power. There's more I could say but I'm too tired. I might give a more detail review later.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've done it again, a other great ch.
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens to Viki
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice work. I was wondering if we might see Bernadette down the road.
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well written story has nice action, good plot elements, and well written sex scenes. The characters are well done even the new characters very likeable.