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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is very creative I hope you keep writing it for a long time.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good work one the 20:th chapter.. such great build up!
My vote goes to a Leona... I would love to see
her getting screwed at her own tavern.
I really like the bond between Oulan and Faroush
so I wouldn't mind seeing another scene with them.
Else, how about having Lo-wen or Hanna join the party?
Keep up the good work!
My vote goes to a Leona... I would love to see
her getting screwed at her own tavern.
I really like the bond between Oulan and Faroush
so I wouldn't mind seeing another scene with them.
Else, how about having Lo-wen or Hanna join the party?
Keep up the good work!
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy crap I didn't think we you get a update till the weekend thanks. As for things I like, I must say like Anita that was funny. and I like that thr Prince was sort of recognize although I find it weird that paintings of the Prince & Arshtat would have been painted. Good job of giving life to the castle and it was good to see Nina pop up for a second time>
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I also love the bond between The Prince and Oulan. I would love to see What Lyon would think about it if she ever found out.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More...I need more. It sustains me.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure but I think he might want a little more feed back than that.
That was a nice discussion between Valeria and the others and nice to see Valeria loosen up a bit. I like that Viktor made it in the chapter and thats just like him to be shirtless with two women in is arms.
That was a nice discussion between Valeria and the others and nice to see Valeria loosen up a bit. I like that Viktor made it in the chapter and thats just like him to be shirtless with two women in is arms.
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh and feedback so you will post another tonight...
Um, I liked the dialogue, and the enviroment you put the characters in. I think they should still be in the Tavern next chapter. Also I think another sex scene is in order, definitly more than a twosome too (maybe Princes Dawn rune affects the bar and it explodes in a giant orgy or something)
Um, I liked the dialogue, and the enviroment you put the characters in. I think they should still be in the Tavern next chapter. Also I think another sex scene is in order, definitly more than a twosome too (maybe Princes Dawn rune affects the bar and it explodes in a giant orgy or something)
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A nice little chapter it help build the relationship of the Prince and Oulan that is growing very fast. I like that you gave some detail into what they did all day it was nice to see the Prince get a weapon in case her get into fight. I'm glad that a cookoff was mention there for a sec I thought that the Prince might see the future Resto. The lively taven scene was great and Anita passing was just to perfect
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The last few chapters have seem a little short but are really great
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM