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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Random. Very random. And quite a few mistakes. You also may want to work on the structures of your paragraphs and such.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks For The Reviews
I'm Glad That You All Liked My Story.
This is my first fanfic that ever written so if it's not good for some ppl I apologize to you.
I'm Glad That You All Liked My Story.
This is my first fanfic that ever written so if it's not good for some ppl I apologize to you.
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seems like Chun Li was waiting for him to have some sweet sex.
From the start, you got straight to the point.
I'm just gonna say, if I don't whack off to a fanfic, it's not good.
Two words: Wet pants.
Awesome fuckin' story, dude. Write more!
From the start, you got straight to the point.
I'm just gonna say, if I don't whack off to a fanfic, it's not good.
Two words: Wet pants.
Awesome fuckin' story, dude. Write more!
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
... and once again the door is slammed in the face of reality in favor of screaming orgasms, women enjoying buttsex and bodily fluids that don't taste like salt-water and sour Warheads.
Astounding job on portraying a very unrealistic and pointless sex scene.
Astounding job on portraying a very unrealistic and pointless sex scene.
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude that was AWESOME, well written too, can't wait to see what happens next.