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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little bit confused about whose talking in the qoutations, so maybe you should clarify? I get the idea of point of view, but as far as people talking to that person, it was rather confusing.
I do like the stream of conciousness though. I'm not sure if there is a plot really formed yet?
I do like the stream of conciousness though. I'm not sure if there is a plot really formed yet?
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story! who's richie? update soon please ^___^
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An odd first chapter I must say but I liked it! Please update soon!