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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews...I really enjoyed this story.
There are just a few minor grammatical errors-- you've confused "its" and "it's" once or twice, but for the most part, it's great writing. I love the sadomasochistic edge to it as well...that's part of what makes Silent Hill smut so much fun.
There are just a few minor grammatical errors-- you've confused "its" and "it's" once or twice, but for the most part, it's great writing. I love the sadomasochistic edge to it as well...that's part of what makes Silent Hill smut so much fun.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Well written, but not sure if I like the coupling.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you I love you lately? I love this fic. ^-^ Keep up the good work luv.