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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute <3
Go Zelly!
Go Zelly!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That...was absolultely amazing. Great job. I think you did a good job of keeping Zelos in character. That was very sexy, good work.
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much. I can never find a decent ZelosxLloyd, but here's one that I can find myself reading over and overrrr! <3333
Thanks for the awesome fic. ^3^
Thanks for the awesome fic. ^3^
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Delightfully written. Your ability to maintain characterization loyalty was very impressive and made the scene all the more enjoyable. I must say that this fic gave me surreal joy, I've never really been able to find any ZxL before. I wish I could make a longer review, but time doesn't permit.
It was fantastic, I hope to see other creations from you.
Nacht
It was fantastic, I hope to see other creations from you.
Nacht
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Hot sex with enough fluff at the end to make it 'aawww'-worthy!
And with the most sensical pairing in the game. [Colette...who's Colette? Gosh it was annoying getting her claws out of Lloyd.]
Characterization was lovely.
Wonderful.
And with the most sensical pairing in the game. [Colette...who's Colette? Gosh it was annoying getting her claws out of Lloyd.]
Characterization was lovely.
Wonderful.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@.o
Congratulations. You are now the proud author of the first well-written Zelloyd smut fic this ToS fan has ever read. Cookies, brownies and booze to the winner! o/ Now, excuse me as I go and salvage my (remaining) brain cells from the pile of goo it has turned into.
~kuro-kitsune~
Congratulations. You are now the proud author of the first well-written Zelloyd smut fic this ToS fan has ever read. Cookies, brownies and booze to the winner! o/ Now, excuse me as I go and salvage my (remaining) brain cells from the pile of goo it has turned into.
~kuro-kitsune~
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::falls over dead across the keyboard due to nose bleeding:: Wow, very well written smut, love how you portray to Zelos to be a dominating seme. I've always loved this pairing and actually playing the game again just so I can get Zelos to be Lloyd's 'special' someone... ::sigh::
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good...I don't think I've read this pairing before (but I don't read much TOS...).
But some of Lloyd's lines were sort of cliche...and a few of Zelo's earlier lines seemed off as well...
Good job ^^.
But some of Lloyd's lines were sort of cliche...and a few of Zelo's earlier lines seemed off as well...
Good job ^^.
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very well written. I love Zelos and Lloyd pairings; they're always so..interesting. Good job on this!