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Oh man, this is so good!! Jin/Hwoarang otp!

Nicely written but the characters didn't seem quite right. Hwoarang seemed a bit too OOC as did Jin. Moreso Hwoarang though.

If you can learn to write the characters a little better you'll have yourself a winner. :)

Great fic! Very nicely written, and I love how devious Jin was to schedule evening classes.. XD Also, Hwoarang as the bottom is my favorite. I like when the stories have the happy ending, but this just seemed a bit.. forced. I mean, they totally love each other, that much is certain. ;D But I dunno, the way it happened was a bit odd to me. I'm sorry! :bows: I was just trying to give some constructive criticism... feel free to ignore it. ^_^;
Once again, though, great job!

Thank you! *bows down* I am so glad to finally read a new Jin\Hwoarang fic, and if you add the fact that it was very well written, just wow. I loved the fact that you managed to keep Hwoarang in charachter while doing something so OOC, and Jin was mostly himself, just not as uptight... :) I would appriciate if you write more, you have the talent, please use it!

mmm... tekken slash. good times good times...