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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the stor. please update?
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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more please! Minor grammar technicalities but good so far.
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update it's so good i have only gotten the 2 game so can you email me who the charecters are except for torn jak and daxter
also it's a really good fic thats extremely well written but in a few places you accidentaly put i instead of it
also it's a really good fic thats extremely well written but in a few places you accidentaly put i instead of it
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nicely done, can't wait until the next chapter