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for The Agony of Defeat

by MoonlightSilver

person Sanakudou
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the concept here. You've got a good writing style as well~!!

I can't wait to read more :D Please continue this.
person animekid
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah real life sucks sometimes

still continue this; I am actually enjoying it O_o shocking I don't usually read this stuff but me like....

Oi I want to know what happens to rock; is he going to be Forte's pet?
person Revu
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!

Great AU world, so angsty and tempting! Poor Rock’s spirit is all broken… That’s OK cause a slave doesn’t need spirit! And I’m sure Forte will be a loving master despite how rough he’ll probably be also. Who knows, maybe the two of them will turn against Wily and then rule the world together! OK Rock probably wouldn’t do that… but still power can be pretty… tempting… hehehe

So many things to do for a story like this! Please don’t let it go, there’s just too many possibilities! I hope you’ll take it further. Hopefully I’ll get to review again after an update!

‘Till then we’ll just wait in anticipation.
-Revu
person angelgirlmia
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loving this so far, keep up the good work.

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