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for Moth To The Flame

by xFlurryxOfxFlamesx

person z32
schedule May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww dang! your story made me cry!! ;---; ...'tis was beautiful!! ToT you have great talent, and I like how you pictured Axel, Roxas and Demyx's characters, really well done!
person alicia
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so sad, but so beautiful. you are a wonderful writer. and it's a shame that no one has taken the time to review you. i'm kinda suprised that this is only your second fic? but you did so well. really wonderful. and i love the Axel Roxas pairing to pieces. so thanks for writing a fic about them.
person MaddiChan
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm depressed. Thanks for making me like, sob cause I really wanted a happy ending. DAMN YOU AND YOUR GOOD BUT DEPRESSING STORY!! ::sobs::
person white sugar
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaaahh.. This story makes me cry.. Please update!!!
person MaddiChan
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::sobs:: Man I want Roxas and Axel together! That chapter was depressing! But your story is badass, you should update more often.
person MaddiChan
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Axel. Bring Roxas back! :Sobs:
person elizabeth
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter :) Smuttastic. Yay~ The only thing I'd mention is that you go back and forth between past and present tense. I do it too XD Just be careful! Great story, please keep writing.
person FlurryxOfxFlames
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Re: elizabeth

Haha yea I noticed that as well. :P I'm working on it. ^_^ Thanx 4 your review <3
person MaddiChan
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I got a little misty eyed, since you're slightly following the game. I felt so bad for Axel in the game but now I feel worse for him. Esp. since we know that Roxas did forget. ::sobs:: If you carry this story on, even to when Roxas merges with Sora, please--please make Sora remember or something. I hate unhappy endings, lmao.
person Hiyotoko
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOoooh great story! Must continue! Seriously. You HAVE too. ^o^

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