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Woo! Horific Torture! Yeah!!
*ahem*
Yeah that was pretty amazing. (And why don't you have Shadow fight like this in ARAAT3, hmm? Really, Ashura would die swiftly.)
I'm surprised she managed to cause such wounds to Shadow though. Ahwell, he'll get back at her in a week. Yeah! Horific Toture, baby!!

Chapter 6= 4.5 out of 5. I only wanted to know about Zebrahead. Zebrahead is one of my favorite bands. But don't worry, I won't talk to someone who steals shoes anymore. I researched it anyway, so now I know.

Back to the story. There's a saying that goes, "What goes around, comes around." Shadow will eventually get what's coming to him. But then again, this is a FANFIC. So that's not guaranteed. And like I mentioned before, seeing Harley Quinn hyenaholic do a Sonic/Amy, would make everyone's jaws drop so fast that they would dislodge from their skulls. (Including myself) Try it! Think about the chinese food! If you don't want to, then just say so and I'll stop getting up your ass about it. Time to wrap this up, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Have a nice day!

hell no, i don't love it! but i'll read it anyway. God knows why?!

I'm going to go out on a limb and say that this is probably the best story you've written concerning the topics of rape and Amy Rose. Particularly because she did put up much of a fight throughout the whole ordeal.

Also, I might have been inclined to say that you were indeed a bit too nice with Amy as opposed to Cream, though I will admit that the psychological trama inflicted will probably play out better in someone Amy's age as opposed to a 6 year old like Cream. Partially due to the level of awareness of what occured, and partially because I'm not sure how one would pull Cream's response off without an some form of study into post child abuse.

You should've killed Amy too. THAT would've driven Sonic insane. Good chapter though.

What will be better? The Xbox 360 @ $399? The Wii @ $249? Or the Playstation 3 @ $599?

I'm gettin' the Wii ^_^

Did you know? Sonic and the Secret Rings' theme song will be done by (of course) Crush 40?

Oh but it doesn't stop there. It will have TWO theme songs. One will be performed by Crush 40. And the second one will be performed by Zebrahead. Cool! ^_^

Hold up! Let's not make Amy pregnate, ok? Like MaddieChan said, "This is not ARAAT." Keep this fic and that one separate. Making Amy pregnate would completely destroy my interest in this fic. As for being 'nicer' to Amy, I don't blame you for that. If I were to write a fic, (Like that'll ever happen) I would've probably done the same thing with MY favorite characters.............or would I? Poor Amy though, this might just leave her emotionally scarred for the rest of her life. Have a nice day!

Actually, I'm not done. I'd like to see you do something innovative. You use the Shadow/Amy relationship a bit much. How about a change of path and do a Sonic/Amy? The relationship you despise. You know, sometimes just trying something out will make you think different about it. Like food. I've never liked Chinese food because I've never tried it. But after I did, I can't stop eating it! Just a suggestion. Do whatever you want. Have a nice day!

Hrmm.. Good. This is really getting good. Or perhaps the word is evil? Either way, I'm looking forward to seeing how Rouge does against Shadow. And I somehow forsee Shadows death in the future after a very bloody battle with Super Sonic. (But don't hold me to that.)

So good that no got hurt in that chapter. but damn that Shadow, that evil, sadstic, but pretty sexy hedgehog. (sorry). Rouge better put up a kick ass fight with him. I hope. can't wait to see what sadistic ways you guys have for the next chapter.

Nice, calm chapter. It's going to be interesting to see what happens between Rouge and Shadow, as Rouge is a lot tougher than Amy and Cream. I feel bad for Amy now though, she's practically broken and this has to be so tramatizing for her.

::Hugs Tails plushie:: Be nice to my two-tailed kitsune. ::sniffles::

1. I'll begin by saying I think your story is awesome, or at the very least, started out sounding intresting (and it still is!).

2. I almost feel like you were *nicer* to Amy just because you like the Shadow/Amy ship, which in a sense, is wrong. You all but destroyed Cream and while I enjoyed Amy fighting and such, I almost felt like you were writing some kind of twisted ship for them most of the time, which, given the premise of the story (or what you SAID the premise was), is slightly annoying. And why make Amy pregnate? This isn't ARAAT, keep that story and this one seperate. Honestly, I don't understand why you didn't kill her too--I would have thought that would have hurt Sonic more: while he may not 'love' Amy, he knows how much she loves/feels about him and he's got a knack for always protecting her. It would be like the ultimate failure, knowing she'd been rapped and killed, short of it happening to Tails. (Please don't be biased when it comes to her and not everyone else, I've read your other stories and you tend to have the sun shine straight out of Amy's ass--though I have to openly admit, I was rooting for her asskicking/ not gonna take it lying down attitude.)

3. Cream's chapter was funny. Not that I enjoyed watching her get rapped but her dialogue and thoughts just made me LoL...sad, wrong, but true.

4. Shamefully love my SLASH, so when are we going to get to that? (Not Knux and Shadow...gawd no...)

5. Leave Tails alone. ::hugs Tails plushie::

6. Meh, at least your not making Sonic an OOC asshole like your other stories, so I can deal.

Overall it's a great, dark, evil, twisted little plot that I enjoy reading. (Even if you are a *little* biased when it comes to Amy.)