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AH! It's too much for me! It's too violent! Nah, just messin'! But seriously, it's pretty gorey. Dm must be insane to like this story better than ARAAT3. Like pendejo said, it's not that it's a bad story, it's just ARAAT3 is better. Can't wait for more! Later!

*pendejo tiembla del miedo* [*pendejo trembles of fear*]

yo no entiendo como Disaster Master le puede gustar esto mas que ARAAT3 [i dont know how Disaster Master can like this story better than ARAAT3]

no ando diciendo que esta estoria es mal, no mas que ARAAT3 es mejor [i'm not saying its bad, its just ARAAT3 is better]

esta estoria es un poqito fuerte pa mi [this story is a little strong for me]

pero voy a tratar de terminarla [but i'll try to finish it]

Well, at least Shadow didn't tourted Amy as bad as what he did to Cream. Wonder what's Rouge going to do with the sick twisted bastard? Love the story so far.

Yikes. This fic is fucking awesome. Call me crazy, but I like this fic better than ARAAT3:TFE. It's a sick, demented story, but strangely, I like it. Chapter 4 score= 4.5 out of 5. I'm anxiously awaiting the next update. Have a nice day!

Seriously, Shadow is fucked up. At first, based off of the title of this chapter, I could swear you were gonna have him go after Knuckles.. Eww.
What he does to Amy isn't as bad as it was reading him doing that stuff to Cream, but still. I can't wait to find out how Rouge'll do against him.

Well "I" will say you are both sick and twisted... But it's a good dark fic. Good job, oh hell spawns!

well, I'm not sure how to feel about this. I honestly think the only thing that kept me reading was the detail and obvious work put into this. Shadow plans on hitting everyone? After reading the chapter about what he did to Cream, my second though was along the lines of "Oh damnit...wonder what Charmey is going to go through..."
I'm not a big fan of this sort of thing, but since Shadow isn't totally insane, I'm actually interested in the fates of the others.
Whoever the Anon person is...
Thanks, I'm suprised this reminded you of Adam's poem, although it took me a few minnutes to figure out why. I suppose this Shadow has common ground with him once 'Adam' isn't in charge. But enough of my OC, either you have a good memory, or you recently found it, I really don't care. Thanks all the same.
Back to the matter at hand though, if this doesn't at all pierce you to write, then I fear for your sanity. Then again, I prety much said this was well written and admitted interest so I should worry about myself now.
Naw...it's just fiction, I won't lose any sleep.
Respectfully yours;
AntwerpsRule

Tell me, when does Shadow get to rape Rouge? Will he get to her? And, if he does, could you please have him engage in mammary intercourse ("tittyfucking", for those so inclined)? Rouge is the only Sonic character who that can be done with.

There wasn't enough blood this chapter. I hope there's a LOT more in the next one, because that would be awesome. Also, if Shadow is THAT insane, then why didn't he just rape her in the vagina? You mean he actually cares about her virginity? I'm not buying it.

-Disaster Master puts his hands over his eyes. Then peeks through one hand.-

Yikes, this is one gorey fic. You guys are two demented sons of bitches. Now don't take that as an insult, because coming from me, that's a compliment. Awaiting more. Chapters 1, 2, 3 score= 4 out of 5.

damn....that is one f-ed up hedgehog. First poor innocent Cream, now Amy. wonder who's going to be Shadow's next victim? Rouge?, Tails?, hell even Knuckles himself? (don't answer that. ) but still, i'm going to be watching and waiting for the next big chapter. keep up the good work.