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This is a very disturbing tale, but that's why I love it!

I found out some cool things about Sonic and the Secret Rings, formerly known as Sonic Wild Fire. Everyone knows that Sonic, Shadow, Silver, Eggman, and that Princess are going to be in it. But apparently what I figured out is that Tails, Knuckles, Amy, and Blaze are also going to be in it. Interesting isn't it?

(I could swear I had reviewed the current chaptor this morning..)

Well this was certainly better. Far better. Although the chaptor title gave away who was going to be next. So Shadow is going to keep her alive for awhile.. interesting. I look forward to the next update.

Well, this kinda thing isn't my personal interest, but by author's code 420 I went ahead andchecked it out.
It's definatly disturbing, however, I have seen worse. As before, your spelling, grammar, and formating are near perfect. I'll continue to follow both of your sonic stories with interest.
BTW, while I'm not perticularly fond of these kind of fics, it doesn't bother me either, so get as bloody and gorey as you wish, I can handle whatever you got.
This is CrazyIvan signing off for now...

Creepy in an almost unhealthy kind of way. Actually, it kinda reminds me of something I read somewhere... can't remember who the author was though.

I can see what you see not;
My Vision dimms, then eyes rot.
Pain, death and blood surrounds you;
Who dies next, I’ll never leave a clue.
Such a blasphemy of your soul and mind;
Makes you wish you were blind.
We shall roar through eternity;
Killing all with delightful glee.
Our pain; the world can see;
Won’t you Please Stop Me.

Or something along thoese lines, damnit. Shadow kinda sounds like this guy someone wrote about.
The message was left by some human lunatic after EVERY 'accomplishment'. Now it's gonna bug me all night. Not that I'm telling you to stop or anything, if ensuring nightmares is what your going for then your probably getting there.

Wow!....great story, you guys. that had me really going. Though i must admitted, the way you portray Shadow was pure poetry in motion even if it did creep me out just a bit. That still didn't stop me from like it. Good but little scary. i'll give it 4/5.

Now that chapter was awesome. It was a sadist's wet dream: Blood, Child Rape, and Disembowlment. It wasn't arousing in a sexual manner, but it was very psychologically arousing. After all, if one cannot disembowel, rape, torture, decapitate, and otherwise cause others to suffer, how can they even claim to be alive?

I wasn't expecting this to happen. Really didn't think Shadow would do something like that, even though I've read the torture scenes of ARAAT2, so I should have known what was coming. Congrats on this chaptor for making me completly dispise Shadow at the moment.

Oh ho ho ho! Brilliant! Now this is the sort of thing that I've been waiting for! Blood and gore, oh yeah. Enough of the mushyness, on with the gore! Finish this up... or else.

Now this story just sounds like a lot of fun waiting to happen. It's going to be bloody, it's going to involve rape, and (I hope) that people are going to die. I saw the M/M tag in the story, so I'll just skip over those parts, but other than that I can't wait to see how brutal this story gets.

It was only a matter of time before you posted another story where Shadow gets all sadistic and shit. (I suppose that collab with Ghostwriter no longer counts, eh?) I like him this way, as opposed to being touchy feely to the point of being totally out of character as a lot of writers tend to have him in their fics, with myself included in that category.(I think...)

You definitely weren't kidding when you said in the prologue that you were purposely making flat out evil. The phone call in itself was flat out eerie, though I think it might have had a better effect if he had caught a hold of someone, like Rouge, or Amy. Or maybe, that's for another chapter?

Secondly, since you mentioned post Sonic Advance, I'm taking it that Rouge and Amy will be the only female characters you see in this, which is just the way I like it. Cream never really seemed to fit into an adult oriented story with rape/sex in the plot unless one of the characters was going for a pedophile motif.

Then again, we wouldn't have those lovely gems of Sonic/Tails/Knuckles lemons without them!

But, anyway, this already has me interested, and seeing as how most of your previous stories have had me hooked in from the get go, I'll be keeping a very close eye on this one.