rate_review Reviews

Wow this story was really good! I liked your ideas for how silent hill works. The whole Alessa thing and how James has more power in this world than he knows. I guess you wrapped it up nicely at the end but there seems to be lot of material there you could expand on if you wanted to continue it.
*crosses fingers and hopes for more*

You should continue with this fandom. It's wonderfully written and I look forward to seeing what you do next.

Very intriguing ideas you presented here--as you included Alessa in James world, and the fact Maria was not some figment of James imagination. She had substance. I also like the unsual ideas of the "merging" between pryamid head and James, and the way he responded to James's constant efforts to escape. I always like it when the Master has to chase the naughty slave...lol. Everyone was pretty much IC despite the AU content of the fic--and that's what makes any fanfiction stick out from the others. AU always illustrates that the author has original ideas and can refresh a fandom--AND still retain the spirit of that world. Why read stories that rehash the games? I can play my PS2 for that.

Nice work, and thanks for reviewing my story as well!

oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this is just as good as your first one i love it. but i wish there was more touching between them you know. but none the less i liked it and i hope you write another story soon.