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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! I really like this! It was totally rockin' in a unique way. Unique is good. It's refreshing. And awesome. So, keep on writing yummy stuff like this, okay? It's very, very good.
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I can ever brush my teeth without blushing like a fool and not choking on the toothpaste in the meantime. X3
Anyways, that was great. I think you're the first to come up with a brushing-your-teeth-while-having-sex story. My compliments on your good writing. Please continue writing stories like this.
ja ne ^^V
Anyways, that was great. I think you're the first to come up with a brushing-your-teeth-while-having-sex story. My compliments on your good writing. Please continue writing stories like this.
ja ne ^^V
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bathroom smecks is always yummy. <3
I love your writing style, and I hope to see mroe Axel/Demyx from you. ^_^
~Drea
I love your writing style, and I hope to see mroe Axel/Demyx from you. ^_^
~Drea
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a totally obscene plot for a story . . . I LOVE it! Its kind of bizarre, but, in a good way. Some nice descriptions and words in there, makes it all the better to read. And Demyx . . not an uke? Whoever heard of such blasphemy! Bravo! Lol.
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Weird, but oh so entertaining. Good job! I'll never look at brushing my teeth the same way again.
... In fact, I think I might go do that right now...
... In fact, I think I might go do that right now...