rate_review Reviews

Hey now that was one Hell of a chapter 8)! Hehe, you had me from the very first paragraph, explaining how badly he wanted a good hot chocolate, and doing it so vividly as well, it just oozed perspective :D. I've never been in a situation as severe as Leon's, but I know from mountain climbing how a simple sandwich or chocolate bar can seem like divine blessing after several hours slogging along in the cold, so I could really relate there. This whole story was packed with that brilliant emotive description of yours that sounds like someone with a lively tongue is telling it to you that I do so love ^^. Really, what I said before about shortening descriptions a tiny bit, this is why, in this one you have a commanding flow not just within descriptions, but from one to the next, and damn it it's stylish and great to read. Fantastic chapter, it didn't need any sex, it was more than good enough without, bravo friend, bravo :D.

No smut?! Baa....Even so, this was a very nice little chapter. So Em-chan is doing yuri in the next chapter? Wait...I thought the next chapter from her was going to be Ada and Salazar? Hmm....I see the next chapter having a lot of smut!

~James

wow that was easy to read through. Nice and fun story. I likes so much ^^ too bad dat there isnt any smut in this chapter.

I likes the smut with leon + ashley and the smut with krauser + ashley. dat ashley is a very lucky girl. dat fake ada got sum too. i want to read sum yuri smut cuz dat is so rare. hurry up plz?

anon u stupid son of a bitch.. if you think her story was crap.. go n write one urself..and u mentioned abt ur eyes bleedin u must be a pussy then mate..no one gives a crap abt what u say..u give head..and ur just an asshole u bastard...go n fuk urself.

pandora ur story was cool especially the actions and the sex scenes..sorry i didnt have time to write much but its good stuff xxxxxxx

Very interesting story. I dont know what to say since the flamers really are being very immature on your story. this is actually a very good read and I'm a bit biased with the LeonxAshley chapters because Leon is my favourite. Also, I love descriptions in a story so maybe that turned me towards that more. The dialogues were cheesy in the chapters with fake ada in it and you did say that that is your style that your going for here. I hope you two continue with your story and dont change styles if you dont want to, unless you want to, although it seems to work fine for both I guess. I dont see anything wrong with the POV thing it didnt seem like a big deal to me and it wasn't done poorly. I'm just confused why this story was targeted for such hatred. Did you authors rub someones back the wrong way and make them jealous?

gah! I'm literaly drooling over your uses of adjectives and descriptions right now XD
Nice job to all of you guys. Its an enjoyable read and the differences were somehow nice.

Is it me or is it getting hot in here? I came to this place expecting to read some hawt loving, not to watch a flame war. To that anon who flamed: if you can't say anything nice, well then maybe you should just shut up. The world's in deep shit already with global warming; no need to add to the mix by spouting your hot gas.

To the authors, awesome job! You keep doing what you're doing! Ignore all this negative bullshit, and hey, if the flames keep coming (I wouldn't know WHY unless the person's a 'dick', hahaha) I'll bring some weiners and steak, and we can have a good ol' fashioned BBQ! ;) Mmm mmm, that's some good eatin'!

naw, just ignore them, guys. Just keep writing your fun stories and we'll keep reading and enjoying it.
dont change your styles for this story. They're just fine for the effect you both wanted.

I dont see what all the fuss is about. I don't think any of the other readers are having a hard time following the story at all. I didnt. And the word 'dick' wasn't overly used either, especially compared to how many chapters have been issued so far.

Dialogue can be cheesy in some places, but the authors said that's what they wanted. And...Resident Evil has always been known for its cheesy dialogue. Hello- "Jill Sandwich?" "They've all become monsters!" "The ladies love the accent." "Where's everyone going, bingo?"

I say everyone needs to grow up. If it makes you feel better about your lack of self esteem to try and put down others just because they are getting nice reviews that aren't 'OH WOW I WANT TO BIRTH YOUR BABIES!' than just go right ahead and flame. Obviously, you aren't going to make anyone else feel the same. And everytime you click on the story and flame, you are only going to make it that much more popular. These two ladies know what they are doing, and it seems there are people (like me) who will defend them.

To the authors, sorry about the rant, and I hope you don't let the ankle biters get to you. You both are extremely talented, and I get a good laugh and a bit of arousal from reading your works. Whoever it was to have that Krauser/Ashley sex scene... that was wow too!