rate_review Reviews

WOW Chaos, I love your story! I read it twice now! It makes me want to play the games again ;). Are you going to continue it soon? Any chance you might write a Condemned story? Because I would LOVE to read your take on the whole inner demon thing ;) This is so well written, the dialog is fluid and believable, the sex is hot and I can even sense the mood of the game in you writing!! KUDOS!!

My God... Words cannot even begin to describe your accuracy and attribution to utmost detail. I was literally clinging on dearly to every word; my face was probably an inch away from my monitor as I read all seven chapters. I have sacrificed sleep over this since I have to get up early in the morning, but my God was it ever worth it. Congrats on writing the best Silent Hill fiction I have ever laid eyes on. I can't wait to read more!

OMG!!! You HAVE to continue this story PLEASE!! I beg of you!!!

OH MY GOD.

OH. MY. GOD.

This is the CREEPIEST f#*%@&* thing I've EVER read!

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

I mean...this is amazing! It's astounding! It's VERY original!! AND IT'S DAMN CRAZY!!! I can tell you have a very deep love for Silent Hill. I do, too! I was so absorbed in this story! And the characters! HOLY CRAP!! Amazing! I totally felt for James, though I'd always just thought of him as a silly fool (kinda like Harry...murr...) with a one track mind! Here, he is total demon-bait!^_^ WHEE!! I mean, he's still James, but with more human qualities! He has more than Mary in his life! IT'S GREAT! I feel so bad for him! He doesn't stand a chance against ONE of them alone, let alone them double teaming him! I am very glad that this wasn't like the typical angry!rape/squick/tort fic that everyone cranks out. They have their purpose, but THIS overshadows them all! I adore your Valtiel and Pyramid Head, the sadisitc, yet shockingly gentle (and cute?) demonic rulers of Silent Hill are totally admirable! I love that they don't just want to hurt James, they want him to be one of them! And with James' tenacity and sense of Justice, he could be a very scary demon! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Hooray for demon flesh!!

I can't wait for more!

I'm so happy to see you updated and absolutely can't wait for the next part, keep up the wonderful work!

Yay you updated I'm sooooooooo happy it was an awesome chapter to, and i almost gave up on ever seeing a update again. well it's good to see one. ^_^

Yes!!! That was so worth the wait. There's just something about evil creatures, demons, monsters, whatever, that just makes me hot. That whole burning his skin off and growing a knew one was messed up but really neat at the same time. Oh, and way to leave us hanging at the end there. I eagerly await some Valtiel on James action! I know it will probably be a while before the next update but that's okay. I've been meaning to rewrite my one story I have up here and start another one for a long while now but I never seem to find the time.
Anyway, I love your stories so rest assured that I will obsessively check this site for updates until the next chapter is up.

mm, i like. it's nice to see a story with valtiel in it.

im_unloved here.

you blow me away.completely.

oh,and instead of 'heat' you type 'head' somewhere.

Wow finally how I have waited for the next chapter and you didn't let me down. It was...well I am not sure if I want a cold shower or a hot one to clean up everything afterwards. Its like the perfect slice of sin, so tasty and yet so wrong.