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by Jadedragoon

schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a great fic! I love H/C fics! There should be more of them in this fandom I think. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing more fanfics from ya! ;)
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, no new reviews for this new chapter yet?

Well anyway...I guess I'm the first for this one *clears throat*

This was a REALLY well done chapter. It takes a similar approach to what I did in the latest chapter in my own fanfic, and personally, I think this was done very well. The thought of the two masturbating to each other is really creative and unique, and I love the details you put into the fic (Although I was like 'wha?' when I realized that Aile was actually masturbating underwater...)

Nonetheless, EXCELLENT! I look forward to your next fic...

P.S: Since you mentioned Prairie...This is going to sound VERY strange, but I like HarpuiaxPrairie pairing (I don't know why I like this particular 'crossover' pairing since they're...'kinda' from different universes (and Harpuia is supposed to be a floating head right now))
person oath_keeper
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. Awesome!
person Racewing
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...damn! Someone beat me to ZX. And with my first-choice pairing, no less! Ahh, well... there's always Ce'dre. :)

Anyway, short, but sweet. (thumbs-up) I approve!
person Holy_night
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yah! finally a good straight lemon! i'm really tired of only yaoi stories...
person oath_keeper289
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Holy fuch!
person MegamanFan
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! A good straight lemon! (Your other two fics were good too, though I was uncomfortable with the Battle network for obvious reasons). It's good how you used excellent detail to describe the fic as well as Aile's feelings and actions. I look forward to seeing more of your work (on here and Megaman's site)

Also, personally I think Vent should have something to do with this. If it's in your level, a three-some would certainly be interesting.

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