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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad initial idea, but it seemed rather rushed.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The potential this plot had was lost in a torrent of crappy, unplanned writing that was obviously poorly thought-out, if at all. Not only that, but it's a solid-fuckin'-box of text with no paragraphing.
Try putting some thought into it next time, eh? 1/5.
Try putting some thought into it next time, eh? 1/5.
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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally a straight story
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Though a little short, it definatly was good. I saw this pairing coming long ago, so i was quite surprised that no one up till this point had tried it. This pairing also might explain who Miranda's mother was and why the she looked so much like cortana, whose holographic form greatly resembles Dr. Halsey.