rate_review Reviews

*sniffle* sooo cute T^T.....i love it...i love how you mention that this isnt a first time thing...cause it seemes like most of the first time fics....but it makes it all that much sweeter ^__^ i love it ^__^

That was....I know that adorable and sexy do not belong in the same sentence, but I think I'll make and exception this time.

Sora's probably not as drunk and helpless and Riku's thinks he is...

ZOMG a RS where theyre actually not OC. I LOVE YOU.

this story was absolutely adorable and fantastic joy to read i really did love it and thought you wrote it perfectly well done ;)

Wow, you are one amazing writer. I'm stunned, speechless.
The wording, the flow ... it's just so vivid. I have nothing to complain about, at all.

I'm simply in awe.
Trust me, I will return to read your stories many times, and hope to see more soon!

Love and cupcakes,
Thiede

To be honest, and I said that I would, I don't usually enjoy first person points of view to a story; but, I can say that I DID enjoy this one very much. I like the Riku/Sora pairing alot, like you know, and the interaction between the two of them was just simply adorable, had Kingdom Hearts not stared up on Destiny Island, I can truly believe that this would be the way that the boys would be like. Gives it a touch of reality, that they are just two boys that have feelings for each other. I liked it a lot.

Yami

awwwwww how cute!!!
Ruki was a little OOC i know i dont see him as the type to pine....however....new Ruki is kinda emo
so who knows?

I tought that your sex was done well
over all good job!

*love* You should write more oneshots like this, I enjoyed it, very good, despite the few spelling mistakes. Aww drunk Sora!