rate_review Reviews

Don't really know what to say, but please write the next part soon. I really want to continue reading.

Yay!
Well written! Interesting!
I want to know more, please keep writing!
[exclamation points are meant to inspire you]

Hmmm, quite a promising beginning. Very "13th Warrior" with the whole language thing; I think its a great idea, a feat of observation and intellect. Your description of the battle with the satyrs was well crafted and entertaining. I do look forward to reading your next installment! (Add more trolls; my favorites; and you win!)

Please keep on writing!

That was awesome. I loved your battle scenes. The pulling out of the rib and using it to stab the enemy that it was pulled from... what a great touch! :D Loved it! Keep up the good work. I would love to read more of this story. :D

Wow...This is very intersting.

Update.