rate_review Reviews

Ohhhhhhhhhh hotness :D. I think I may have reviewed this before after reading it on LJ but I'm in a ficcy mood tonight and running around my various fandoms and couldn't resist re-reading now that I know the characters properly, and it's just delish. Gale's writing is still my favourite part of it, but now I just... I adore the little details like Cielo's reactions to Gale's reactions, and the bright green eyes detail, and Gale examining the semen :D. It's so very right for them. Hooray!

Oh, and your Cielo doesn't irritate me like in-game Cielo kind of does, so double hooray! Or is that triple hooray?

I desperately need to write for this fandom XD.

Hot and sweet, just how I like 'em. Great job! :D