rate_review Reviews

^_^ wow this is a great pwp story. I like this pairing and I wish you do more!

u need more reviews 4 this. ^_^Its is so gud. maybes sum ppl dun like the pairing? still very gud.

I honestly felt bad for Bitores...you made me really emphasize with his plight when Saddler told him elminiate the children. I always wondered in the game where all the children went, and what you implied happened is rather gruesome. Poor Kiddies.

I also enjoyed how Saddler seemed unsure at the end; how he didn't know which Bitores he cared for most. It reminds me of the "Be careful what you wish for." scenerio. Yeah, now he has second thoughts? Gee, should of thought about that before you fucked him dipshit. Sorry, that annoyed me...lol. Anyway, good job, and I like how the sex mixed pain and pleasure--my favorite!

Thanks for the review on Ashes BTW...though I didn't know it was you until I saw the sig.

Oh you KNOW I love this. I love the pairing; it's the best ever. And your executiion of the entire thing: priceless.
What a wonderful background you've given Mendez. this is So HOT. That's all I have to say. Keep it up with this fabulous pairing.